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After posting yesterday’s topic, I decided to show you what GPT-4 has done. I’m writing this so you can see my original work and how GPT-4 sanitizes content. I’m a bit alarmed that GPT-4 would do this, especially on this topic. I’ve complained to OpenAI about this sudden change in how GPT-4 works. To illustrate, I’ve reposted yesterday’s copy below. Scroll below it to see three versions of how GPT-4 completely changed my work.

So you know how I work, I will never use GPT to generate my content or write for me. I take tremendous pride in my writing and only use it as an editor. I found this alarming because I couldn’t help but think of the ramifications if everything we write is someday sanitized in the same way.

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I’ll start by saying, I’d rather swim through two miles of poop than raise money on a new venture. There, I said it. It’s my least favorite thing to do and right up there with firing or laying off someone. I’m writing this to help you make the process of raising money as painless as possible.

I think that entrepreneurship is all about getting through a set of hurdles that many can’t or won’t overcome on your way to success, hurdles such as; idea, commitment to start, raising money, product development, manufacturing, deliver, etc., are all sort of the initial rights of passage on your way to a successful company and exit. Live this mindset so you don’t get frustrated and quit. Every phase is like another rung on the ladder and they are not easy, which is why you make the bucks at the end. Size up the challenge, then do everything possible to overcome each rung rather than become a victim of that challenge.

All of these hurdles are difficult by themselves, but raising money is just as uncertain as any other hurdle, and for most, one of the most difficult hurdles they face. The fact is, few deals get funded. Very few! The others die at the business plan stage, but when you dig past the initial pitch into the core of what they are pitching, most should die and have no real future as a company.

To many entrepreneurs this is the very first reality check they ever faced. Can the business make adequate money to generate a reasonable return for investors? Many startups can’t possibly make a profit or are in such a tiny niche that they would never be much of a business for anyone. Often they are a terrible idea and raising money is the first time someone said so.

Some are pitched by people who have seriously psychological issues and go into these meetings angry and defensive rather than positive and upbeat. I had one guy pitch me who just lectured me the whole time. He had zero self-awareness. He was defensive from his first sentence. Don’t be that person! Get feedback about YOU before you start. I had a guy threaten me once when I said no to a deal, like that would cause me to change my mind. Know how you come off to others before you pitch.

I’ve had people come to me with either “women only” or “minority owned” as their secret sauce as if that would make a difference and improve their chances of success. Numbers are color and gender blind. They don’t care. Either the numbers work or they don’t. So don’t bother with the gimmicks. If you’re women or minority owned, great, you have a business to build so don’t hide behind gender and color status.

The ventures that deserve to be funded and have all the right metrics stand a far better chance, so don’t lump yourself in with the overall numbers and focus on that percent that are worthy of funding and become that. Make sure you have a great plan and presentation from the start. This means look and sound the part of a venture that should get funded. Don’t cry because you’re a disadvantaged class and nobody is interested in funding your cheese straightening business when consumers aren’t looking for straighter cheese in the first place.

I’ve had too many entrepreneurs come to me for names of people in my network when they have a bad plan, a terrible presentation, and no ability to pitch. I can’t forward a bad plan. Nobody wants to torch their own credibility and network making introductions for your awful pitch! It has to be good so people are proud to send it to the right people. They may even send you to the wrong people if they don’t like your pitch, just so they can claim they did something.

Now, there are some fundamentals you have to understand before you raise a dime. I’m surprised by how many miss this point.

I’ve listened to a lot of business ideas where there is no plan for investor repayment. None. When I ask, they just stare at me, or there is silence on the phone like a stage-slapped Chris Rock. They never once considered that investors want out! They do.

I can’t think of anyone who wants to put money into a venture where they can’t get that money back out. Nobody, except maybe Gram-gram who’s already picking out her casket. Even the most conservative family fund expects a return and an exit at some point. They may have a longer timeline, but they still want out.

Nobody who’s serious about a return just invests and then goes away. So, the second you take a dime from anyone, the clock is ticking for repayment. Understand that point from the start. Everyone wants a clear path to an exit. Sophisticated investors want to get out. The term of art, of investing and never getting out is called, “evergreen financing” and nobody wants to be in that situation where they evergreen financed a deal.

In the case of a loan, you all know, it’s repayment of principal plus interest. For a piece of your company as a shareholder, they want the company either sold, their shares bought out at a higher price, or a public exit where they can sell their shares on the open market. If they don’t see a path to any of those things in a reasonable amount of time, it’s a pass. Why should they invest? Nobody wants to just be in something without a return except maybe Gram-gram. So, before you call on anyone, you’d better have a clear payback strategy.

Understand from the onset that Venture Capital or “VC” funding is and always has been a rigged game with a defined set of criteria. VCs, in spite of what you may read, tend to internally hire people who are somewhat political, look at a lot of deals in the course of their day, and will say anything to string you along, right to your face, all while playing with other people’s money.

Often the VCs your dealing with have zero entrepreneurial experience and not a single successful exit in their entire professional career. Many won’t tell you the real truth about why your deal was rejected, and sometimes they will mislead you when they have no plans to invest. Some of the smarmiest people I’ve met in business to date are VCs. Know that going in. You’ve read my post about identifying the species, and this applies to VCs. Know who they are and their reputation going in. Talk to other people and their history with the VC you intend to pitch. If you’ve watched the TV show Silicon Valley, you see a mildly exaggerated version. Spoiler alert! It’s not lost on entrepreneurs that the VC is in jail at the end.

In my experience, VCs will bet on the pedigree of the founders over character or strength of plan, because it’s easier to defend pedigree if it fails. There are political elements that go on behind the scenes that you may not know, and life just isn’t fair sometimes. Don’t expect an even hand from any VC. Don’t think because you’re a minority, you have an in. VCs are all about a combination of risk, politics, internal, and sometimes hidden check lists in the form of criteria that’s both stated and unstated. Some deals are done as favors to others for future deal flow, so when you’re rejected, it may not have a thing to do with you so move on.

Ironically, the same holds true if they do fund you, only to later discover than nobody else likes your business. Many companies can’t raise a dime after that first Series A.

Work on the next potential source of money and don’t hold a grudge. Improve your pitch and try again with someone else. I’m telling you all this so you don’t feel like someone just pulled your underwear over your head and pushed you into the hall.

“It’s sometimes who you know.” We’ve all heard this before and in the case of raising money, it’s true. Start to network and get to know investors long before you need the money. Even after you raise money or are nailing down a term sheet, never stop talking to money sources, no matter what. You never know when you may need more money.

Attend VC presentations, network, go to VC managed competitions and get to know people and get them to know you. Talk to others who just received a round of funding and ask them what they did, how they did it and who they should approach. A lot of startup CEOs will help you, having been in their shoes, so call on them for advice. Build relationships. If you end up in a good network as we did, the funding gets easier, but it’s never perfect and there are always hurdles, so expect it, and come up with the right workaround and keep going. Don’t let it slow you down.

Never ever, ever, send in a business plan to anyone cold. That will go on a pile somewhere and get used to prop up a webcam on someone’s desk. For me, the best way I was able to get in front of the right investors was by meeting inactive investors who didn’t want to put more money at risk, but still wanted to be involved in the startup community and were willing to help me with our pitch. In one case, we found someone who was at Microsoft who made a lot of money during their growth and was more than willing to make introductions to people at private family funds where they previously co-invested. Just networking through that group led to investors. I had to have my pitch down and believe me, when I began, I didn’t. You practice, practice, practice over and over, and do it in front of a video camera and critique yourself.

The biggest single mistake entrepreneurs make when raising money is that they can’t get to the point during their pitch. They think that vomiting information will help them when it does just the opposite. Get your pitch down to a simple concept, pitch it, then shut up and listen. I mean it! STOP talking! Too many entrepreneurs don’t shut up and listen to the reaction or pay attention to the follow-on questions. Read the room. They just think the harder they pitch, the more likely they are to convince someone when it’s the exact opposite. The only thing the investor is thinking about is how to get away from you, never to return. I can’t emphasize it enough… (I know that the majority of you reading this, in spite of what I just wrote, will do it anyway.)

There is a psychological element and if you seem combative or annoying, pushy and unpleasant, nobody wants to get involved with you. I’ve had that happen where someone pitched me and I thought how dreadful it would be to work with them every day. Don’t think you’re going to get funded by brute force in a meeting.

I had one experience where we were turned down by Fluke because the person they hired to conduct due diligence got just about everything wrong about us. I had to contain my anger in the meeting, something that took the wind out of me as I sliced and diced his report, line by line. I explained who would likely buy us and why, and it’s exactly what happened. It wasn’t my best moment and not something I recommend. Benaroya Capital was also in the meeting and heard my passionate retort, and when I was finished, red faced as I was, John Carelton, the managing partner, said, “I’m in!”

One of the best ways to get an opportunity to pitch is through the big entrepreneurial law firms like Wilson-Sonsini and others who are directly tied to VCs. They will often make your first introduction through someone they know and get you the right audience. However, that said, Wilson-Sonsini can be snobby too. In spite of their being our attorneys, I recommended them to someone else last year and they treated them very badly, so within these big firms, find the right people.

Before Silicon Valley bank collapsed, that was where you went to bank because they had direct relationships with VCs. They could get you in the door, so look for a venture bank that can do the same thing, even if you’re a small account holder. The small venture banks in my experience have some decent people.

Yes, it costs some money to hire a big law firm to help get you in the door, but talk to their biz-dev people about how to bring you in as a client. There is always a way to make something happen and so much of raising money is about overall momentum. Some law firms have package deals for startups and while they charge fees, they also take stock in your company in the form of warrants to help keep costs in check. A good law firm can do a lot, but they too were well panned on the the TV show Silicon Valley.

Of course there are angel networks and it’s important to plug in and attend those meetings where there are discussions and pitch competitions. I just asked David Rose, a fellow Quoran and angel investor where he would send people and he suggested Signal. I’ve never used them before, but that’s a part of the game, finding new sources and networking to get in the door.

Don’t forget to use LinkedIn and other social media to connect. Quora is also good. Be prepared to pitch often and keep refining your pitch after every meeting. Use what you head as feedback to tighten down your presentation.

I was pitched this week! The entire pitch was twelve pages. It came to me on an email link. This CEO has raised over $300 million dollars for his last two companies and he knows what he’s doing. It was graphics rich, easy to understand and follow. He has it down. It’s an excellent pitch and right to the point. If I can share it at some point, I will. You read it and it checks on the boxes; strong concept, easy to understand, solid team, clear growth plan.

When you’re rejected, don’t just give up. Fix the problem! Make the adjustments to your plan. Correct what’s wrong with it and get out there and keep working at it. It’s not going to be easy, it’s not how this entrepreneur thing works.

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I'll start by saying I'd rather swim through two miles of poop than raise money for a new venture. There, I said it. It's my least favorite thing to do, right up there with firing or laying someone off. I'm writing this to help you make the process as painless as possible.

I believe entrepreneurship is all about overcoming a set of hurdles that many can't or won't face on the way to success. Hurdles such as the idea, commitment to start, raising money, product development, manufacturing, delivery, etc., are all initial rites of passage on your journey to a successful company and exit. Embrace this mindset, so you don't become frustrated and quit. Every phase is like another rung on the ladder, and they are not easy. That's why you reap the rewards in the end. Recognize the challenge, then do everything possible to overcome each rung rather than becoming a victim of it.

All of these hurdles are difficult on their own, but raising money is just as uncertain as any other and, for most, one of the hardest they face. The truth is, few deals get funded. Most don't progress past the business plan stage. However, when you delve deeper into what they are pitching, many of these plans should indeed fail and have no genuine prospects as a company.

For many entrepreneurs, raising funds is their first reality check. Can the business generate a reasonable return for investors? Many startups either can't turn a profit or cater to such a narrow niche that they'll never make significant business. Often, they're just bad ideas, and the fundraising process is the first time someone has highlighted this.

Some pitches come from individuals who seem psychologically unstable, approaching these meetings with anger and defensiveness rather than positivity. I once had a man pitch to me, lecturing the entire time with zero self-awareness. He was on the defensive from the get-go. Don't be that person! Seek feedback about yourself before you start. Once, a man threatened me when I declined a deal, thinking that would change my mind. Know how you present to others before you make your pitch.

I've seen people lean heavily on their "women only" or "minority-owned" statuses, as if these factors alone would increase their chances of success. Numbers are color and gender-blind. They don't care. Either the numbers add up, or they don't. Avoid such gimmicks. If your business is women or minority-owned, that's great. Focus on building your business instead of relying on such labels.

The ventures that are truly deserving of funding and meet all the right metrics have a much better chance. So focus on becoming one of them. Ensure you have a stellar plan and presentation from the outset. This means looking and sounding like a venture that deserves funding. Don't lament your perceived disadvantages and expect sympathy investments. No one is keen on funding a poorly-conceived idea.

Too many entrepreneurs seek referrals to my contacts when they're not ready, armed only with a weak plan, an uninspiring presentation, and no pitching skills. I can't forward a subpar proposal. People's reputations are at stake. A proposal needs to impress so much that people are proud to share it. If they dislike your pitch, they might refer you to the wrong contacts just to seem helpful.

Before you seek any funding, grasp some fundamentals. I'm astounded by how many overlook this.

Numerous business ideas I've encountered lack a strategy for repaying investors. When questioned, many entrepreneurs are dumbfounded. Everyone, except perhaps your grandmother, expects a return on their investment.

Venture Capital, or "VC" funding, has its rules. Many VCs lack entrepreneurial experience or successful exits under their belt. They might not be upfront about why they rejected your proposal and might string you along even if they have no intention of investing. Many VCs prioritize a founder's pedigree over the strength of the plan, owing to the politics behind the scenes. Some deals happen due to internal favors or to keep the pipeline of deals flowing. So, if you're declined, it might have nothing to do with your pitch. Refine your approach and try elsewhere.

Networking is key. Engage with investors well before you need their money. Regularly attend VC events, get to know relevant players, and let them get to know you. Speak to startup CEOs for advice and build relationships. But never, ever send a business plan cold. It'll end up lost or ignored.

During a pitch, get to the point. Oversharing does more harm than good. Present your idea succinctly, then pause and listen.

Engage with reputable law firms connected to VCs. They can offer introductions to the right audience.

Remember, banks that cater to startups often have VC connections, which can be invaluable.

While it might be costly, hiring a reputable law firm can open doors for you. Some law firms offer special deals for startups, balancing fees with stock options in your company.

There are also angel networks and various platforms like LinkedIn, Quora, and others to help with networking and introductions. Always be ready to pitch and refine your approach after each interaction.

To sum up, when you're turned down, don't just give up. Address the issues, adjust your strategy, and persist. Success in entrepreneurship requires resilience and adaptability.

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I'll start by saying I'd rather swim through two miles of poop than raise money for a new venture. There, I said it. It's my least favorite thing to do, right up there with firing or laying off someone. I'm writing this to help you make the process as painless as possible.

I believe entrepreneurship is about overcoming a series of hurdles that many can't or won't conquer on your way to success. Hurdles such as idea formation, commitment to start, raising money, product development, manufacturing, delivery, etc., are all the initial rites of passage on your way to a successful company and exit. Embrace this mindset so you don't get frustrated and quit. Every phase is like another rung on the ladder, and they're not easy, which is why you earn the big bucks at the end. Size up the challenge, then do everything possible to overcome each rung rather than become a victim of that challenge.

All these hurdles are difficult in themselves, but raising money is just as uncertain as any other, and for most, one of the toughest. The reality is that few deals get funded. Very few. Most perish at the business plan stage. However, when you dig past the initial pitch into the core of what's being proposed, many should indeed fail because they have no genuine future as a company.

For many entrepreneurs, this is their first reality check. Can the business generate enough money to provide a reasonable return for investors? Many startups can't turn a profit or target such a small niche that they'll never be a major player. Often, they're simply bad ideas, and the fundraising process is the first time someone has told them so.

I've encountered pitches from individuals who are either overly aggressive or defensive, rather than positive and upbeat. I once had someone pitch me and lecture me throughout. This person had zero self-awareness and was on the defensive from the get-go. Don't be that person. Seek feedback about yourself before you begin. One entrepreneur even threatened me after I declined his proposal, as if that would change my mind. Know how you come across to others before you pitch.

I've seen people focus on being "women-only" or "minority-owned" as their unique selling point. But numbers are color and gender-blind. Either the numbers make sense, or they don't. If your business is woman or minority-owned, that's great. But focus on building your business without relying on that status as a crutch.

Businesses that deserve funding and meet all the right criteria stand a far better chance. Focus on being part of that percentage that's worthy of investment. Ensure you have an impressive plan and presentation from the outset. This means appearing and sounding like a venture that deserves funding. Avoid presenting yourself as a disadvantaged business owner lamenting that nobody wants to fund your misguided idea.

Many entrepreneurs seek introductions from my network despite having a weak plan or pitch. No one wants to risk their reputation by forwarding an inadequate proposal. Your pitch has to be compelling so people feel proud to share it. If it isn't, they might just send you to the wrong contacts to appear helpful.

Before seeking funding, understand some essentials. I've heard numerous business pitches with no plan for repaying investors. When I ask about it, they either stare blankly or fall silent. Investors want their money back, with interest. And, unless it's your sweet Grandma, everyone expects a return on their investment. Understand this from the beginning.

Remember that Venture Capital (VC) funding is a tricky game. Often, the VCs you deal with might lack genuine entrepreneurial experience. They may not always be transparent about their decision-making. Be cautious and informed.

VCs often prioritize founders' backgrounds over the actual merit of the plan. There are politics and ulterior motives at play that you might not always be privy to. So, if a VC declines your pitch, it might not always be about you. Keep refining your proposal and try other sources. Stay connected and keep networking.

Never submit a business plan unsolicited. From my experience, warm introductions from inactive investors or reputable law firms like Wilson-Sonsini can open doors. However, always research and choose your partners carefully.

While raising funds, streamline your pitch. Overloading investors with information is counterproductive. After presenting your concept succinctly, listen. Gauge reactions and adjust accordingly.

Lastly, if you face rejection, don't give up. Refine your plan and approach. Remember, being an entrepreneur is never easy, but perseverance and adaptability will serve you well.

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I'll start by saying I'd rather swim through two miles of poop than raise money for a new venture. There, I said it. It's my least favorite thing to do, right up there with firing or laying someone off. I'm writing this to help you make the process as painless as possible.

Entrepreneurship is about getting through a set of hurdles that many can't or won't overcome on your way to success. Hurdles such as idea, commitment to start, raising money, product development, manufacturing, delivery, etc., are all initial rites of passage on your way to a successful company and exit. Embrace this mindset so you don’t get frustrated and quit. Every phase is like another rung on the ladder, and they are not easy, which is why you earn the big bucks at the end. Size up the challenge, then do everything possible to overcome each rung rather than becoming a victim of that challenge.

All these hurdles are challenging on their own, but raising money is as uncertain as any other hurdle. For many, it's one of the most challenging they face. The fact is, few deals get funded. Very few. The others die at the business plan stage. However, when you delve deeper than the initial pitch into the core of what they're pitching, most should not proceed and have no real future as a company.

For many entrepreneurs, this is the first reality check they face. Can the business generate enough money to provide a reasonable return for investors? Many startups can't turn a profit or are in such a niche market that they'd never be significant. Often, they're just bad ideas, and raising money is the first time someone pointed it out.

Some pitches come from people who have severe psychological issues and who approach meetings with anger and defensiveness instead of positivity. I had one guy pitch me who lectured the entire time. He lacked self-awareness and was defensive from the outset. Don't be that person! Seek feedback about yourself before you begin. I even had someone threaten me after I declined a deal, thinking it would change my mind. Understand how you appear to others before you pitch.

I’ve encountered people who pitch "women-only" or "minority-owned" businesses as their unique selling proposition. Numbers are color and gender blind. They don’t care. Either the numbers work, or they don’t. So, drop the gimmicks. If you're a woman or minority-owned business, focus on building your company, not hiding behind status.

The ventures that deserve funding and meet the right metrics have a better chance. Focus on being one of those worthy of funding. Ensure you have a solid plan and presentation from the start. Present yourself as a venture that deserves funding. Don't complain about being a disadvantaged group and wonder why nobody wants to invest in your niche product if there's no demand for it.

Many entrepreneurs ask me for contacts, yet they come with poor plans, awful presentations, and lackluster pitches. No one wants to damage their credibility by recommending your subpar pitch. It has to be outstanding so people can proudly refer you. They might even refer you to the wrong contacts if they don't like your pitch, just to seem helpful.

Now, before raising any money, you must understand some basics. I've heard numerous business ideas with no investor repayment strategy. When questioned, they're often clueless. Investors seek a return; they want their money back.

No one willingly invests in ventures from which they can't retrieve their money, except perhaps your elderly grandma. Even the most conservative family fund expects a return and an exit eventually. They might have a longer timeline, but they still want an exit strategy. Once you accept money from someone, the repayment clock starts ticking. Prepare for this.

Recognize that Venture Capital or "VC" funding is a rigged game with specific criteria. Often, VCs you're dealing with lack entrepreneurial experience. Many won't reveal the true reason they rejected your proposal. Be wary of them and research their reputation before pitching. If you've seen the TV show "Silicon Valley," you'll get a slightly exaggerated idea. It hasn't escaped viewers' notice that the VC ends up in jail.

In my experience, VCs bet on the founders' backgrounds over character or plan quality. There's internal politics you might not see, and sometimes life isn't fair. Don't expect fairness from any VC. Just because you're a minority doesn't guarantee an advantage. VCs consider a mix of risk, internal politics, and both explicit and hidden criteria. Some deals are done as favors for future prospects. If rejected, it might not be about you. Move on, work on the next potential source, and don't hold grudges. Improve your pitch and approach someone else.

"It's sometimes who you know." This phrase is true, especially in fundraising. Begin networking and acquainting yourself with investors long before you need capital. Never stop networking, even after securing funds. Attend VC presentations, networking events, and competitions. Seek advice from startup CEOs. Build relationships. Proper networking can ease funding, but it's never seamless, and obstacles always appear. Prepare for them and persevere.

Never send a business plan unsolicited. It'll likely be forgotten or discarded. To reach the right investors, I often relied on inactive investors who were still keen on the startup community. Networking can lead to significant investor connections. Perfect your pitch through constant practice and self-critique.

A major mistake entrepreneurs make is over-explaining during pitches. Instead, keep your pitch concise, then stop and listen. Gauge reactions and attend to follow-up questions. Investors canKeep your head up. Keep pressing forward. Don’t take a no from someone who can’t give you a yes in the first place. Get good at being resilient. And please, don’t raise money unless you absolutely have to. Use your own money to get started. It’s called bootstrapping.

The only time you should ever consider taking someone’s money is when you can make money with their money. If not, use your own funds. That’s a lesson I learned the hard way. It’s never good to owe someone and be beholden to them. You don’t want to give away your equity, even if you think it’s a good idea. Remember, money is a commodity. It has no real value, it’s just a piece of paper.

Lastly, don’t forget to have fun along the way. This journey, no matter how hard it is, is about building something. And that’s something to be proud of. You’ll have stories to tell, mistakes to share and successes to boast about. Whether you get there the hard way or the easy way, the destination is worth it.

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Substack has a limit to the length of my posts and I’ve reached it. I could paste part two, but it’s more of the same, and each time GPT-4 refused to adhere to my instructions. You get the idea. The key lesson here is double-check your GPT-4 edits. It may be sanitizing your work in a way that makes it more politically correct and far from your original.